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简介1.高中英语短文改错口诀2.高考短文改错有什么技巧吗?要做好改错题,首先要过语法关。建议你用魏老师的《高考语法完全突破》视频教程好好地系统学习一下语法,然后再用以下技巧检验。高考英语短文改错解题技巧 魏训刚短文改错对考生的要求较高,是对语言知识综合运用能力的考查,考生在该项上往往失分较多,那么如何做好改错题,结合自己数年的教学经验,笔者认为要想在短文改错上取得理想的成绩,除了平时打好基础外
1.高中英语短文改错口诀
2.高考短文改错有什么技巧吗?
要做好改错题,首先要过语法关。建议你用魏老师的《高考语法完全突破》视频教程好好地系统学习一下语法,然后再用以下技巧检验。
高考英语短文改错解题技巧
魏训刚
短文改错对考生的要求较高,是对语言知识综合运用能力的考查,考生在该项上往往失分较多,那么如何做好改错题,结合自己数年的教学经验,笔者认为要想在短文改错上取得理想的成绩,除了平时打好基础外,在应考时还要做到以下几点:
一、先通读全文。认真阅读短文,在做题之前确保已经弄清原文大意。根据短文大意和上下文逻辑关系,对文章进行逐字逐句的分析,检查句子的结构是否完整,语气是否连贯,启承转合是否符合文意等。
二.综合运用所学语言知识,根据各行不同的错误情况分别进行答题(即改词、加词或减词)。在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类:
1. 名词:单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。大多数短文改错都会有此类的错误。如:
Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! (2000 北京春考),
此句中return虽然可以作可数名词也可做不可数名词,但此处显然为可数名词,故应用其复数,returns。
(1)On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. 81(NMET 2002)句中picture应为pictures
(2)Their word were a great encouragement to me. 85(NMET 2003)
句中word应为words
(3) …but after class we become stranger at…83 (NMET 2004)
句中stranger应为strangers
2. 动词:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。如:
(1)Around the world young people are spending a lot of money in listening pop music.
本句中listen是不及物动词,不能直接接宾语,应在其后加to。
(2)She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good one.84(NMET 2003)
句中reads应为过去式read
(3)As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.80(NMET 2002)
此句visiting 应为visited
(4)One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 83 (NMET 2003)
此句中showed是及物动词,其后要加it作其宾语。
(5)Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. 81 (NMET 2003)
句中talk应为talking, 因为enjoy后接doing.
3. 形容词副词:常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反;关系副词where, when, why等的缺失或错用,如:
(1) I would describe myself as shy and quietly. 77(NMET 2004)
句中副词quietly 应改为形容词quiet
(2) It was about noon ˇwe arrived at the foot of the mountain. 78 (NMET 2002)
此句we的前面缺了关系副词when, when在此处引导一个时间状语从句。
(3) I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. 89 (NMET 1997)
此句中,where应改为which,因为关系副词不能在句中定语从句中做主语。
4. 介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失,错用。这一部分需要平时多多积累,弄清常用介词的搭配。
(1)We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ˇourselves.92 (NMET 1998)
此句中instead 和ourselves之间需加上of, 因为instead是副词,本身不可以接名词。
(2) I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. 85(NMET 2002)句中at多余。
(3) The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese… 77(NMET 2003)
句中in多余。
(4) I’m a newcomer here of a small town. 76(NMET 2004)
句中of 应改为from
5. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。
Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.(NMET 2000)
此句中主语是my picture and the prize, is 应改为are.
6. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the,或是same等常和the一起使用的词却漏税掉了the;a, an的混用,特别注意:hour, honest等虽然首字母不是元音字母,但其发音却是以元音素开头,故用an,而useful, university, European, one-hour等虽然首字母是元音字母,但却以辅音音素开头,故用a。如:
As everyone knows, it’s ˇfamous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. 76 (NMET 2002)
此处famous前应加上冠词a
7. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用,如分数的分子大于一时分母没有用复数等,基数词的复数形式如几百hundreds of,几千thousands of漏掉了s,或是当其前有具体数字或several时加了复数,如seven hundred,写作seven hundreds。
8. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so),或相反等等。如:
(1)The food was expensive and the service was good. 84(NMET 2002)
根据句意,此句中连词and应改为 but 。
(2) I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. 84 (NMET 2004)
此句中since应改为but。
9. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。如只能用that引导的用了其它,或在不能用that的地方却用了that,或是在“介词+关系代词”结构中漏掉了介词等。如:
(1) …I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 78(NMET 2003)此句中不定代词anything应改为everything
(2) I was learning to express me in simple English. 82(NMET 2003)
此句中me应改为其反身代词myself。
10. 常用固定短语或固定用法用错。
(1)Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them.78(NMET 2004)
此句中,well 前应加as ,as well as 是固定搭配
(2)Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor sisters---in any other words , I’m an only child . (NMET 2001)
此句中,in any other words应改为in other words ,属固定短语。
(3)Can you tell me about what I should do? 85(NMET 2004)
应去掉about ,tell sb+wh 从句,是固定用法,而tell sb.+ of/about后需接 sth.
三、验证答案。改完后,要回过头来重读一遍全文,查看改过后是否能使语气通顺,时态一致,合乎逻辑。再次通读可以在初改时感觉不顺的地方集中精力,仔细推敲,使答案更加准确。因为有时就一个句子来看可能在两个地方修改都说地过去,但在上下文中可能只能在一处修改才正确。
高中英语短文改错口诀
一、试题特征
设错类型分两大类:语法错误和逻辑错误,语法错误包括词法错误和句法错误。错词现象主要出现在名词单复数、动词时态、非谓语动词、连词、介词、主谓一致、代词、词形(指应该用动词、名词还是形容问形式,以及平行结构中词的正确形式)、冠词。缺词现象主要出现在冠词(名词前)、介词(不及物动词后或固定结构中)、助动词、不定式符号to,连词、语义不完整现象等方面。多词现象主要出现在冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及行文逻辑等方面。下表为近两年高考短文改错词法设置的主要考点:
二、解题思路
(一)注意英语词汇的曲折变化从历年高考短文改错的命题看,考查英语的曲折附加成份占有相当大的比例。
所谓曲折变化即是各种词形的变化,它是拼音文字特有的表现形式,如:动词的曲折变化,名词的曲折变化,代词的曲折变化,形容词副词的曲折变化等,而汉语则无这种变化。因此在复习时,应充分了解各种词性的曲折变化,针对性地进行专门训练。
1.考查英语动词多变的外在形式,包括时态的曲折变化、现在第三人称单数、被动语态的曲折变化、非谓语动词的曲折变化等。
A.非谓语动词错误
1) I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future! (NMET 2005福建)
析:see改为seeing。look forward to 中to为介词,后接动名词。
2) I may just listen to music; I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts. (NMET
2004全国卷II)
析:giving改为given,过去分词做定语。
3) In other words, they help to keep people strong and feel good (NMET 2005湖北)
析:feel改为feeling,考查keep sb. doing
4) I found a small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room (NMET
2005江西)
析:shone改为shining。"with+名词+现在分词”构成的复合结构。
B. 时态错误
1)
Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become strangers at once. (NMET2004)
析:talked改为talk,由后半句可知。
2) I will write again and send you the photos we take together. (NMET 2005)
析:take改为took
C. 语态错误
1) When one student does so, much larger values are destroying. (NMET2005重庆)
析:destroying改为destroyed。
2) After the drive, it was cost just over $ 2 to put the car back into perfect cond至t至on.
(NMET 2005安徽)
析:去掉was。此处cost不用被动语态。
2.考查英语名词的单复数变化
1) And I came to understand that knowledge, could change my life (NMET 2005辽宁)
析:knowledge,改为knowledge.
2) I used to love science class-all of them biology, chemistry, geography, physics. (NMET
2001春季)
析:class改为 classes,山后半句可知。
3.考查英语代词的变化
1) I felt very pleased with me. (NMET 2005天津)
析:me改为myself.
2) This is not surprising that the Silver Ghost was regarded "the best car in the
world".(NMET 2005安徽)
析:This改为It, it代替that从句。
4.考查比较形容词、副词的变化
1) It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. (NMET 2005福建)
析:real改为really.
2) It is dishonest and foolishly to help or to ask help from others. (NMET 2005重庆)
析:foolishly改为foolish。
3) (After learning the basics of the subject,) nothing else seemed very practically to me. (NMET 2001春季)
析:practically改为practical,形容词作表语。
5. 考查词性、词形误用。不同的句法功能要求使用与之相适应的词性、词形。
1) There have been reports in America
about people trying to steal person information for bad purposes. (NMET2004卷III)
析:person改为personal,形容词做定语。
2) Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience. (NMET1998)
析:important改为importance。
3) I would describe myself as shy and quietly.(NMFT 2001)
析:quietly改为quiet, describe... as后用形容词。
(二)考查短文中的行文逻辑错误
针对此类试题,考生必须对全文整体理解并根据上下文,才能发现问题所在。考生要根据前后文的选择、因果等其他关系确定使用适当的连词。同时不要忽视and—but;and—or;
not对于整个句意的逻辑关系所造成的根本变化,这也是命题的惯用手法。例如:
1) We liked the dishes you bad cooked but we were happy to learn the English songs you
taught us. ( NMET2007,山东)
析:but改为and。上下文为并列关系。
2)
Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. (NMET 2001)
析:although改为as because. 上下文为因果关系。
3) He told me that I'd probably have a heart attack while I started eating less. (NMET
2005广东)
析:while改为unless.
4) First, let me tell you something more about myself. (NMET1997 )
析:去掉more,
more与句首first逻辑不符。
(三)短文改错中的一致现象
短文改错中所涉及的一致关系主要包括主谓一致,即谓语动词的单、复数形式要与句子主语保持一致;时态一致,即句中谓语动词的时态要与该句中的时间状语或上下文乃至全文的时态保持一致;代词指代一致,即代词所指代的内容要与该先行词在性和数方面以及要与其自身的指代在意义上保持一致。例如:
1.代词指代一致
l) Some
students may also save up for our college or future use. (NMET 2005)
析:our改为their。主语为some students。
2) More people start a stamp collection of your own (and discover an interest which can
even last a lifetime). (NMET 2004浙江)
析:your改为their,注意代词和主语的一致。
2.主谓一致
1) Having fun with their friends make them happy. (NMET 2005湖北)
析:make改为makes,
动名词做主语,谓语动词用单数。
2) I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in
the library. (NMET 2000)
析:由and连接两个并列成分,如果不是指同一个人或物,或一体性的物如knife
and fork等,谓语动词要用复数形式。故将is改为are。
3.时态一致
1) They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my
studies so that I'll get goal marks in all my subjects. (NMET2001)
析:根据全文时态,应将did改为do。
2) During the World Cup in 2002. my dad stays up late just to watch his favorite sport.
(NMET 2005浙江)
析:stays改为stayed。
(四)注意短文改错中的平行结构现象
平行结沟是指两个或更多的词、词组或从句具有相似或相等的句法功能。在表达相互平行的概念时.要使用相同的语法结构,即动词与动词相配,形容词与形容词相配,分词与分词相配,不定式与不定式相配,短语与短语相配。平行结构经常借助于并列连词and,
but,or或连词词组not only...but also... , not... but...,either... or...,neither...
nor...,as well as等。例如:
1) I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. (NMET 2005辽宁)
析:felt改为feeling,和going并列。
2) We named him Jack and keep him for about three years. (NMET 2005江苏)
析:keep,改为kept,和named并列。
(五)“画龙还须点睛”......短文改错中的缺词错误分析
1.缺系动词
I'd like to your pen friend, and get to know more about your country. (NMET 1997)
析:like to后加be.
2.缺介词
But I have spent most my money, so I cannot even go out of town. (NMET 2004)
析:my前加of。
3.缺冠词、物主代词等限定词
1) I hope you've had pleasant journey home. (NMET 2005)
析:pleasant前加a.
2) Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. (NMET 2001)
析:fire前加the,
4.在定语从句中缺关系代词或关系副词
People do not know each other often become friends after they have played together. (NMET 1990)
析:people后加who,此句缺少定语从句引导词。
5. 缺连接词
I told Mother. Father, Sister, all my friends(here what a great time I had). (NMET 1995)
析:all前加and,最后两个并列成份之间要用并列连词。
6.缺否定词
He is a kind-hearted man and he will refuse to help others at any time.
析:Will后应加not,根据逻辑可知。
7. 缺不定式符号to
My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good
education. (NMET2001)
析:make前加to。不定式表示目的。
8.缺少助动词
Why you think so tinny people still suffer from poverty now? (NMLT 2001广东)
析:Why后加do。
(六)“画蛇何须添足”......短文改错中的多词错误分析
1.受母语思维影响,出现汉语式结构,造成冗言冗言错误的形成主要来自汉英差异的模糊。
对英语惯用语在使用上的细微差异缺乏了解。主要考查程度副词和频率副词,如much,
more,often等的多余;同意的重复现象;句子结构中多余的词以及由于受汉语的影响,多用了某些词语等。例如:
1) Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. (NMET 2000)
析:去掉often,因为whenever表示“无论什么时候”,若用often显得重复。
2) I'll spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it. (NMET 2000春季)
析:all与the whole重复。只能保留一处,由于此处不表示特指,故只能去掉all。
3) Clever as she is, but she works very hard.(NMET 2004福建)
析:去掉but前一句是让步状语从句。
2.不明词义内涵,造成词义重叠
1) I was a few miles far away from anywhere on a cold, wet night. (NMET 2005江西)
析:去掉far, far和a few miles语义重复。
2) All of us were sitting around the fire in the living room, listening to one of grandma's
best favourite stories.
析:去掉best或favorite, best意为“最好的”, favorite意为“最喜欢的”,语义重复,所以只保留其中的一个。
3.多介词
1) Will you join in the tourist group organized by our school? ( NMET 2005山东)
析:去掉in。
2) But for the most wonderful thing about Jack was his musical ability. (NMET 2005江苏)
析:去掉for。
3) I won't be able to come in this time. (NMET 2000北京春季)
析:去掉in。作状语的时间名词前有this,
that, these, those, one, all, next, last, tomorrow, yesterday, any, some, every, each等修饰时,其前不能使用介词。
4.多冠词
We have made a great progress. (NMET 2005福建)
析:去掉a, progress不可数。
5.定语从句中的成分重复
1) There are a lot of things I haven't time to do them.
析:去掉them, them和被省略的定语从句引导词重复。
2) He has made a great discovery which I think it is of great importance to science.
析:去掉it, it和which重复。
6. 固定搭配中多限定词
1) Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. (NMET 2000)
析:去掉a,句中是固定搭配,表示“(忽然)看见”。
2) …in any other words, I am an only child. (NMET2001)
析:去掉any, in other words为固定搭配,意为“换句话说”。
7.多不定式符号to
Some students may also to save up for their colleges or future use. (NMET 2005)
析:去掉to,情态动词后用动词原型
8.形容词副词前多修饰语
Both the diet and the exercise will help me to lose weight and feel more better. (NMET
2005广东)
析:more改为much。more不能用来修饰better。
三、短文改错题的解题策略
(一)解题步骤
l.通读全文,掌握大意
短文改错不同于单句改错,它涉及行文逻辑及句子与句子间必要的联系错误。单独看可能是对的,但从整体看却与上下文不符。做短文改错时应该树立整体意识,应从短文整体入手,短文改错实际上间接地考查考生的文意理解和纠错能力,所以考生必须在阅读并且在理解文章的基础上去发现并改正错误。因此,事先应该先快速粗读一遍短文,留心文中关键的词句,把握文章的大意及上下文之间的联系,为下一步判断和改错奠定基础。
2.整句理解,逐行分析。
因为短文改错题的特征是分行设置错误的,而不是以句子为一个单位设置错误。考生在进行改错时必须在通读全文的基础上,对照上下文逐行逐字细读,分行判断理清句意,找出上下文之间的内在联系及其行文逻辑关系,推断字里行问的含义,检查句子的结构是否完整,语气是否连贯等。在细读全文时,抓住短文改错的规律,分析要以句子为理解单位,挖掘错误却要以行为单位。总之,在分析句子过程中,考生应对每句话的句子成分进行分析,根据上文讲的错误类型确定正确答案。
3.复读全文,检查核对
回头重读全文验证答案,将初步改错的短文再次细读,检查并验证所做的答案是否能使语气贯通流畅,行文逻辑发展是否合乎情理,语篇结构是否严密完整。在复读检查过程中,既要看清词和句子,更要注意整体的逻辑关系,特别是上下文的联系,既要重视文字、句子的字面意思,又要弄清文字段落的内在含义和内在逻辑关系及篇章结构。还要特别留意文章的意思是否连贯通顺,是否符合逻辑。
(二)须注意的问题
1.在训练和考试中要严格按照题例要求和解题说明,用规定的符号去改错。不要用文字去说明或用箭头去表示,更不能随意在原题中乱划。
2.注意一些改错原则
1)标点符号不改。
2)词序错误不变。
3)大小写不改。
4)改错只能是一一对应,不能把两个或更多的词改为一个词。
5)必须用相近或相反的词更换名词或动词等实词。
3.在平时高三复习过程中,要系统掌握英语语法知识,并能正确运用。注意收集平时易犯错误,重视归纳总结,熟悉错误类型。短文改错与书面表达的训练要相互渗透。在写作时,要注意培养自己的纠错能力。考题中的错误五花八门,但只要有了一定的水平,什么样的试题都能应付。所以练习短文改错时,应尽量从正面入手,牢牢掌握正确的规则。
高考短文改错有什么技巧吗?
短文改错口诀
动词形,名词数,
注意形和副;
非谓动词细辨别,
习惯用法要记住;
句子成分多分析,
逻辑错误须关注。
一、动词形
主要包括两类错误:动词的时态和语态错误,以及主、谓不一致的错误。例如:
NMET’98 My favourite sport is football. I was member of our school football team. is
NMET’00 Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. are
上述两例分别属于时态错误和主、谓不一致错误。找出此类错误的关键是树立牢固的时态概念,注意短文内容发生或存在的时间,保持时间概念的一致性。
二、名词数
指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。例如:
NMET’01 …so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. subjects
三、区分形和副
即区分形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。
这也是高考短文改错的常考点。例如:
MET’95 I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. wonderful
NMET’99 Unfortunate,there are too many people in my family. Unfortunately
需要注意的是,形容词多用来做定、表、补语等,而副词只能在句子中作状语,修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。第一例中的wonderful作定语修饰time,第二句的Unfortunately作状语修饰整个句子。
四、非为动词细辨别
这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有分词和动名词类错误,也包括不定式类错误。例如:
NMET’97 …in my spare time,but now I am interesting in football. interested
NMET’98 Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also … playing
NMET’01 My parents love me… and will do all they can ∧ make sure… to
上述二、三例分别是动名词作主语,和不定式作目的状语。一般的,现在分词有主动态和进行时的含义,而过去分词具有被动态和完成时的含义,不定式有将来时态的`含义。
五、习惯用法要记住
主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识。这也是历年高考的常考点,其错误表现形式主要有三种:多词、少词和搭配错误。
例如:
NMET’96 It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and… of
NMET’98 We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ ourselves. of__
六、句子成分多分析
不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语景要选择不同的词语。这些都有待我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析,才能找出用词不当的错误。例如:
NMET’96 They ∧eager to know everything about China and… were
NMET’97 I live in Beijing,where is the capital of China. which
第一例漏掉了谓语动词were,这是受寒于习惯的影响而导致的错误;第二例则是词类与它在句子中的成分不相符,where是副词,不能作主语。
七、逻辑错误须关注
与句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴,人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误,常是这类错误的考查对象。例如:
NMET’96 The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. their
NMET’97 First,let me tell you something more about myself. 去掉more
NMET’99 … no way of setting the matter except by selling the set.
Now someone at home reads instead. everyone
上述第一例中的主语是Smiths(史密斯夫妇俩),因此后面的his不合逻辑。第二例中的more在这儿表“再”的意思,才开始告诉别人,怎么能说“再告诉你一些事”?第三例讲的是为了解决看电视时的争端,“我们”把电视机卖了;晚上没电视看了,所以与从前一样,大家又都读书了,所以该用everyone.
除了上述错误类型外,常考的错误形式还有:连词but,and,or和so的用法错误(可以归类为逻辑错误),以及冠词的用法错误等。例如:
NMET’00 She was smiling but nodding at me. and
NMET’01 It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. or
NMET’01 We may be one family and live under a same roof. the[1][2]
一、考点规律分析 短文改错的名词考点主要涉及名词的单复数问题,即在该用复数的地方误用其单数,或在该用单数的地方误用其复数,关键是记住常用的不可数名词和集体名词以及复数形式表达不同意义的名词(见核按钮) 二、真题单句归纳 (1)Westoppedtorestforawhileandtodrinksomewatersfromastream.(waters改为water,因“水”为物质名词,不可数)(全国卷) (2)Weclimbeverywhere,notonlyinAmerica.WehavebeentoEuropemanytime.(time改为times,manytimes意为“许多次”)(全国卷) (3)Therearebranchlibraryinmanyvillages.(library改为libraries,因其前的谓语are为复数)(全国卷)w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m (4)Ihopethatyoutwocouldcomeandvisitussometimessoon.(times改为time,sometime意为“某时”)(全国卷) (5)TodayIvisitedtheSmiths—myfirsttimevisittoanAmericanfamily.(去掉time,因first已含有“次”的意思)(全国卷) (6)TheywereeagertoknoweverythingaboutChinaandaskedmelotsofquestion.(question改为questions,因其前有表示复数意义的修饰语lotsof)(全国卷) (7)Westudyquiteafewsubject,suchasmaths,Chinese,Englishandphysics.(subject改为subjects,因afew后应接复数可数名词)(全国卷) (8)…andoftenwatchfootballmatchonTVtogether.(match改为matches)(全国卷)(9)Happybirthday,Peter,andmanyhappyreturnoftheday!(return改为returns,manyhappyreturnsoftheday!为祝贺生日的惯用表达)(北京春季卷) (10)Shesaidthatsheandmyschoolmateallwishedmesuccess.(schoolmate改为schoolmates,因校友不只一个,另外根据其后的all也可推知)(全国卷) (11)Iusedtolovescienceclass—allofthem—biology,chemistry,geography,physics.(class改为classes,指其后提到的所有课程)(北京春季卷) (12)Theydidnotwantmetodoanyworkatfamily.(family改为home,因athome为固定短语)(全国卷) (13)…sothatI?llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.(subject改为subjects,请注意前面的all)(全国卷) (14)OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywassobeautiful.(picture改为pictures,picture作为可数名词,其前应有限定词,或为复数形式)(全国卷) (15)Nooneworriesmuchabouttheradioprogramyoungpeoplelistento.(program改为programs,从句意上看,此处应用复数)(北京春季卷) (16)Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.(word改为words,注意其后的复数动词)(全国卷) (17)Youknow,thatwasadinnerwehadwaitedforseveralmonth.“(month改为months,因several后要用可数名词的复数形式)(江苏卷)